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diff --git a/Report/Chapter3.tex b/Report/Chapter3.tex
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--- a/Report/Chapter3.tex
+++ b/Report/Chapter3.tex
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ information will be stored in the Database XML, this file will be
 supported by three other XML files. The information in the Database
 XML will be increased by two methods. You can enter information
 manually, or the information will be imported from other sites via
-RSS-feeds. A RSS is the second kind XML file. This is a standard XML
-file. The website will also offer information via a RSS feed.
+RSS-feeds. An RSS is the second kind XML file. This is a standard XML
+file. The website will also offer information via an RSS feed.
 
 In this section you can read how the XML files are build.
 \subsection{Database XML}
@@ -15,16 +15,14 @@ Two files contains grouping information of the liquor. And there is
 one file which contains technical information for the incoming RSS
 feeds. In this section we will discussed the four files. This will be
 done by a description, (a part of) the file and a XML tree. We
-started with the two grouping information files. Note: The
+started with grouping the two information files. Note: The
 information in the XML files is the information, or a part of the
 information, which the files contains at the moment this report is
 written. Some files can be extended with information, because of the
-dynamically of the website.
+dynamicallity of the website. \\
 
-
-\subsubsection{LiquorTypes.xml} In this file we'll store the different
-kind of liquor, for which we have data in the database. Below you see
-the XML-file.
+\subsubsection{LiquorTypes.xml} In this file we will store the different
+kind of liquor, for which we have data in the database. Below a snippet of the XML-file.
 \begin{verbatim}
 <LiquorTypes>
   <LiquorType ID="1"><Name>General</Name></LiquorType>
@@ -33,14 +31,14 @@ the XML-file.
   <LiquorType ID="4"><Name>Cocktail</Name></LiquorType>
 </LiquorTypes>
 \end{verbatim}
-Every type had its own ID on which the items are related to. The name
-of the LiquorTypes will also being used by the search engine of the
-site. Below you see a the XML file about the liquor types:
-\\\\
-On figure below you'll see the Data tree of the LiquorTypes XML. For
-all element in the XML there will be only one shown completed. If
+Every type has its own ID on which the items are related to. The name
+of the LiquorTypes are also being used by the search engine of the
+site. Below you see a the XML file about the liquor types: \\
+
+On figure below it can be seen that the Data tree of the LiquorTypes XML-file. For
+all elements in the XML there will be only one shown completed. If
 there can be more elements, which are the same as their siblings,
-they are showed dotted (without their descendants).
+they are shown dotted (without their descendants).
 \begin {center}
   \includegraphics[width=53.7mm]{LiquorType.png} \\
   Data tree of LiquorType.xml
@@ -52,8 +50,8 @@ they are showed dotted (without their descendants).
 
 
 \subsubsection{NewsCategories.xml}
-In this file we'll store the different categories the items are from.
-It is very similar to the LiquorTypes XML. Below you see the
+In this file we will store the different categories the items are from.
+It is very similar to the LiquorTypes XML-file. Below you see the
 XML-file.
 \begin{verbatim}
 <NewsCategories>
@@ -64,12 +62,12 @@ XML-file.
 \end{verbatim}
 
 Every category had its own ID on which the items are related to. The
-name of the LiquorTypes will also being used by the search engine of
-the site. Below you see the XML file about the NewsCategories:
-\\\\
-On figure below you'll see the Data tree of the NewsCategories XML.
+name of the LiquorTypes are also being used by the search engine of
+the site. Below a snippet of the XML-file about the NewsCategories can be seen: \\
+
+On figure below you'll see the Data tree of the NewsCategories XML-file.
 All elements in the XML will be shown completed. If there can be more
-elements, which are the same as their siblings, they are showed
+elements, which are the same as their siblings, they are shown
 dotted (without their descendants).
 \begin {center}
   \includegraphics[width=138.1mm]{NewsCategory.png} \\
@@ -83,8 +81,8 @@ dotted (without their descendants).
 
 
 \subsubsection{DB.xml}
-In this file we'll store the main information of the website. Below
-you see a part of the XML-file.
+In this file we will store the main information of the website. Below
+you see a snippet of the XML-file.
 \begin{verbatim}
 <db>
   <items>
@@ -116,7 +114,7 @@ you see a part of the XML-file.
   </items>
 </db>
 \end{verbatim}
-The site captains many news messages, these news messages are stored
+The site contains many news messages, these news messages are stored
 in the item elements, which is a child of the items element. The
 following elements are part of the item element:
 \begin{itemize}
@@ -127,17 +125,17 @@ LiquerTypeID's.
 the news message. A news message can contain one or more
 NewsCategoryID's.
 \item \underline{pubDate}: This is the date when the news messages
-are written. (If the incoming RSS feeds doesn't contains a date, then
-our pubDate will be the date on which the news messages is added to
-our site)
+are written. (If the incoming RSS feeds does not contain a date, then
+the pubDate will be the date on which the news messages is added to
+the site)
 \item \underline{guid}: This is the link of the original news
 messages on the original site.
 \item \underline{title}: This is the title of the news messages.
-\item \underline{intern}: This is the link of the news messages on our site. If this link is followed, the news messages is shown on our site.
+\item \underline{intern}: This is the link of the news messages on the site. If this link is followed, the news messages is shown on the site.
 \item \underline{description}: This is the news messages.
 \end{itemize}
-On figure below you'll see the Data tree of the DB XML. For all
-element in the XML there will be only one shown completed. If there
+On figure below the Data tree of the DB XML-file can be seen. For all
+elements in the XML-file there will be only one shown completed. If there
 can be more elements, which are the same as their siblings, they are
 showed dotted (without their descendants).
 
@@ -150,10 +148,8 @@ showed dotted (without their descendants).
 
 
 \subsubsection{rssfeeds.xml}
-In this file we'll store the RSS binding information for the incoming
-RSS feed, so the website knows from which rss he must take
-information, and how that is must store. Below you see a part of the
-XML-file.
+In this file we will store the RSS binding information for the incoming
+RSS feed, so the website knows from which rss the information must be taken and how that it must be stored. Below you can see a part of the XML-file.
 \begin{verbatim}
 <IncomingRSSFeedBindings>
   <RSSFeed ID="1">
@@ -167,22 +163,22 @@ XML-file.
 
 </IncomingRSSFeedBindings>
 \end{verbatim}
-The following elements are part of the RSSFeed element:
+The following elements are part of the RSS Feed element:
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \underline{Name}: This is the name of the RSS feed. This is
 used to show the RSS feeds bindings on the site.
 \item \underline{Url}: This is the URL of the RSS feed. From this,
-the website gather the information.
+the website gathers the information.
 \item \underline{LiquorTypeID}: This is the ID for the liquor type,
-which will be bind to all the incoming massages from the RSS feed.
+which will be bound to all the incoming messages from the RSS feed.
 \item \underline{NewsCategoryID}: This is the ID for the News Category,
-which will be bind to all the incoming massages from the RSS feed.
+which will be bound to all the incoming messages from the RSS feed.
 \end{itemize}
 
-On figure below you'll see the Data tree of the DB XML. For all
-element in the XML there will be only one shown completed. If there
+On the figure below you will see the Data tree of the DB XML-file. For all
+elements in the XML there will be only one shown completed. If there
 can be more elements, which are the same as their siblings, they are
-showed dotted (without their descendants).
+shown dotted (without their descendants).
 
 \begin {center}
   \includegraphics[width=117.2mm]{rssfeeds.png} \\
@@ -204,29 +200,28 @@ The website uses two types of RSS feeds:
 
 
 \subsubsection{Incomming RSS-feed}
-This is the RSS-Feeds from which the website takes his information.
-There are several incoming RSS feeds and for each the website does
+This is the RSS-Feed from which the website takes its information.
+There are several incoming RSS feeds and for each, the website does
 the same procedures to add the information into the database. This is
-done every day, by running a PHP script. The following procedures
+done six times a day, by running a PHP script. The following procedures
 will be done for every RSS feed:
 \begin{enumerate}
-\item Takes a RSS feed an read the information from it.
-\item Check for every item if the item is already in de
+\item Take an RSS feed and read the information from it.
+\item Check for every item if the item is already in the
 database. This is done by a title check. More information about this
-can be read in chapter 4. If the item is already in the database on
+can be read in chapter 4. If the item is already in the database continue
 with point 4.
-\item Add the item to the DB.xml and go on with the next item of RSS
-Feed
+\item Add the item to the DB.xml and go on with the next item of RSS Feed
 \item The news item is already there, so check if the LiquorTypeID and NewsCategoryID is
-the same. If it is the same go on with the next item of RSS Feed.
+the same. If it is the same, go on with the next item of RSS Feed.
 \item The news item is already there, but it has different LiquorTypeID's or NewsCategoryID's, so add the new LiquorTypeID or NewsCategoryID to the item and go on with the next item of RSS Feed.
 
 \end{enumerate}
 \subsubsection{Outgoing RSS-feed}
-The website has also an outgoing RSS-Feed. In this feed the latest
+The website also has an outgoing RSS-Feed. In this feed the latest
 twenty news messages from the database will be put into an RSS feed.
-The latest twenty news messages are gained from the DB xml via a X
-Path Query. This information is put via XML php statements into the
+The latest twenty news messages are gained from the DB xml via an XPath Query.
+This information is put via XML php statements into the
 RSS Feed. A part of the XML php statements can be read below.
 \begin{verbatim}
   // create doctype
@@ -253,8 +248,8 @@ This part of the code generates first a XML document with version
 \textit{"rss"}. The root gets also the attribute named
 \textit{"version"} with the value \textit{"2.0"}. The statement
 \textit{"\$dom-$>$formatOutput"} makes the output file readable.
-\\After that the code creates a channel element en add it as a child
-of the root element. Then a title element will be created and add to
+\\After that the code creates a channel element and add it as a child
+of the root element. Then a title element will be created and added to
 the channel element as a child. This title element will contain the
 text \textit{"Pottepei RSS feed"}. This is the way that the whole
 RSS-feed will be build. Below is a part of the XML file which this
@@ -265,14 +260,14 @@ part of the code generates.
     <channel>
       <title>Pottepei RSS feed</title>
 \end{verbatim}
-This code will be automatically execute every day.
+This code will be automatically executed every day.
 
 
 
 \subsubsection{The construction of a RSS feed}
-A RSS feed has a standard constructions. We use the RSS version 2.0.
-There are many information which you can store in a RSS feed. We use
-a some of those. Below you can see a part of our RSS feed file:
+An RSS feed has a standard constructions. We use the RSS version 2.0.
+There is much information which you can store in a RSS feed. We use
+some of those. Below you can see a part of our RSS feed file:
 \begin{verbatim}
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <rss version="2.0">
@@ -317,15 +312,15 @@ found \subitem \underline{title}: The title of the news massage
  \subitem \underline{description}: The news massage itself.
 \end{itemize}
 
-This are also the elements we use from the incoming RSS feeds. Note:
-From the initial RSS feeds, the feed from www.cocktailz.nl, doesn't
-has a pubDate, so we take the day on which the website imports the
+These are also the elements we use from the incoming RSS feeds. Note:
+From the initial RSS feeds, the feed from www.cocktailz.nl, does not
+have a pubDate, so we take the day on which the website imports the
 news massage as pubDate.
 
-On figure below you'll see the Data tree of the RSS-feed XML. For all
-element in the XML there will be only one shown completed. If there
+On the figure below you will see the Data tree of the RSS-feed XML. For all
+elements in the XML there will be only one shown completed. If there
 can be more elements, which are the same as their siblings, they are
-showed dotted (without their descendants).
+shown dotted (without their descendants).
 \begin {center}
   \includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{RSS.png} \\
   Data tree of RSS.xml