From 2de68a074294e7a44f398a5f3be8b3deddd44cee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Oliver Schinagl <oliver@schinagl.nl>
Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2008 12:51:20 +0000
Subject: spelling errors fixed.

---
 proposal/2id45.wfproject | 3 ++-
 proposal/content.tex     | 9 +++------
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/proposal/2id45.wfproject b/proposal/2id45.wfproject
index a9c2acf..c224c62 100644
--- a/proposal/2id45.wfproject
+++ b/proposal/2id45.wfproject
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@ files: /home/oliver/2id45/proposal/2ID45-Proposal.tex
 basedir: /home/oliver/2id45/proposal/
 basefile: 
 template: 
-view_bars: 0
+view_bars: 1
 word_wrap: 1
 recent_files: /home/oliver/2id45/proposal/content.tex
 recent_files: /home/oliver/2id45/proposal/2ID45-Proposal.tex
 opendir: /home/oliver/2id45/proposal
+savedir: /home/oliver/2id45/proposal
diff --git a/proposal/content.tex b/proposal/content.tex
index b25292c..ad53442 100644
--- a/proposal/content.tex
+++ b/proposal/content.tex
@@ -15,9 +15,7 @@ Group 1 consists of three CSE students: \\
 
 \subsection{Description}
 
-The application is about liquor and is called "Pottepei" which is flemish (Antwerp) for a drunk. The database will contain information regarding various sorts of
-alcoholic beverages. The web-based PHP application reads all kinds of info from RSS feeds and puts it into the database. Users can then query the database and also
-subscribe to our RSS feeds. The figure below shows how our application reeds and sends the XML information. \\
+The application is about liquor and is called "Pottepei" which is Flemish (Antwerp) for a drunk. The database will contain information regarding various sorts of alcoholic beverages. The web-based PHP application reads all kinds of information from RSS feeds and puts it into the database. Users can then query the database and also subscribe to an RSS feed concerning this database. Figure 1 explains how the application passes data around. \\
 
 \section{Specification}
 
@@ -30,13 +28,12 @@ can search for liquor and alcoholic beverages like cocktails and all sorts of be
 
 If a user wants to keep posted on the latest ins and outs, he or she can sign up for the RSS feed. These topics will also be posted on the website's front-page. \\
 
-For every listed beverage we keep track of a number of things. Were it's being brewed or produced, the percentage of alcohol by volume (at 20 $ ^\circ $C) and so
+For every listed beverage a number of things are tracked, such like; Were it is being brewed or produced, the percentage of alcohol by volume (at 20 $ ^\circ $C) and so
 on. \\
 
 \subsection{Technologies}
 
-The structure of our database will be stored as a XML schema. The queries that the user can send using the web-interface are done with XQuery mixed with XPath. The
-HTML pages containing the liquor info are made up using XSLT. The figure below shows how the application uses the used techniques apply to the functionality. \\
+The structure of our database will be stored as an XML schema. The information for the database will either be retrieved from other sites, such as www.cocktailz.nl and wijnspecialist.be via an RSS-feed or manually entererd. The queries that the user can send using the web-interface are done with XQuery mixed with XPath. The HTML pages containing the liquor info are made up using XSLT. Figure 1 below shows how the application uses the techniques to obtain the functionality. \\
 
 \begin {center}
   \includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{pottepei.png} \\
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