From c5f5576425ee93ad1752703fe7436c3593f10e2d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Oliver Schinagl <oliver@schinagl.nl>
Date: Wed, 21 Sep 2005 09:47:05 +0000
Subject:

---
 URD/1.0/chapter1.tex | 17 ++++++++++++-----
 URD/1.0/chapter3.tex | 12 ++++++------
 URD/1.0/urd-1.0.tex  |  1 +
 3 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/URD/1.0/chapter1.tex b/URD/1.0/chapter1.tex
index 84fa8a2..aa0fe1b 100644
--- a/URD/1.0/chapter1.tex
+++ b/URD/1.0/chapter1.tex
@@ -19,19 +19,26 @@ The system being developed will be called TCCRMS. TCCRMS enables organizations t
 
 \textbf{ESA} & European Space Agency\\
 
-\textbf{UR} & User Requirements\\
+\textbf{eServices} & Insurance service from "system to system" \\
 
-\textbf{URD} & User Requirements Document\\
+\textbf{HR} & Human Relations or people management\\
+
+\textbf{Risk} & Everything that can be insured (insurance vocabulary)\\
 
 \textbf{SR} & Software Requirements\\
 
 \textbf{TCCRMS} & TOTAL COVER CRMS\\
 
-\textbf{HR} & Human Relations or people management\\
+\textbf{UR} & User Requirements\\
+
+\textbf{URD} & User Requirements Document\\
+
+
+
+
+
 
-\textbf{Risk}        &   Everything that can be insured (insurance vocabulary)\\
 
-\textbf{eServices}   &   Insurance service from "system to system" \\
 
 \hline
 
diff --git a/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex b/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex
index ae05498..2392352 100644
--- a/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex
+++ b/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
     \endhead
     \hline
     RIP01
-            & The range of insurances for individual customers are:
+            & Possible insurances for individual customers are:
             \begin{itemize}
                      \item vehicle
                      \item home
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RIP02
-            & The range of insurances for organizational customers are:
+            & Possible insurances for organizational customers are:
             \begin{itemize}
                      \item vehicle
                      \item home
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RIP05
-            & Details of the insurances must be documented formally.
+            & Details of the insurances will be documented formally.
             & 1\\
     \hline
 \end{longtable}
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
     \endhead
     \hline
     RPA01
-            & With an insurance proposal the system will be capable to provide an initial premium amount.
+            & Given an insurance proposal the system will be capable to provide an initial premium amount.
             & 1\\
     \hline   
     RPA02
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RPA03
-            & Payments shall be made in the following terms:
+            & Payments shall be made in one of the following terms:
             \begin{itemize}
                     \item daily
                     \item weekly
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RPA04
-            & Premium payments shall be renewable automatically or manually.
+            & Premium payments shall be automatically or manually renewable .
             & 1\\
     \hline
 \end{longtable}
diff --git a/URD/1.0/urd-1.0.tex b/URD/1.0/urd-1.0.tex
index 92aeb8b..291a26f 100644
--- a/URD/1.0/urd-1.0.tex
+++ b/URD/1.0/urd-1.0.tex
@@ -18,6 +18,7 @@
 %
 %----------------------------------------------------------
 \begin{document}
+\selectlanguage{english}
 \frontmatter
 \include{title}
 \tableofcontents
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