1 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex b/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex
index 02d95bb..201f09d 100644
--- a/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex
+++ b/URD/1.0/chapter3.tex
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RGE02
-            & It will be possible for the system to know whether a client is being represented by a 3rd party.
+            & It will be possible for the system to know whether a client is being represented by a third party.
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RGE03
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RGE04
-            & The system will recommend cross-sell and up-sells opportunities via the insurance combination that have been entered into the system by the business department.
+            & The system will recommend cross-sell and up-sells opportunities using the insurance combination that have been entered into the system by the business department.
             & 1\\
     \hline
 \end{longtable}
@@ -50,13 +50,13 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
     \endhead
     \hline
     RIN01
-            & Details of the insurances must be provided to the government organizations governing the policies, using an interface to their existing software system.
+            & Details of the insurances must be provided to the government organizations governing the policies using an interface to their existing software system.
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RIN02
-            &  The system will provide an interface to government departments:
+            &  The system will provide an interface to:
             \begin{itemize}
-                   \item that help in legal issues
+                   \item government departments that help in legal issues
                    \item hospitals
                    \item the police
             \end{itemize}
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RIN04
-            & The system shall provide detailed information of client on the staff's system screen once the caller has been identify.
+            & The system shall provide detailed client information on the staff's system screen once the caller has been identify.
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RIN05
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RIN06
-            & The system shall provide a basic calculations on insurance proposals for premiums via the internet website.
+            & The system shall provide basic calculations on insurance proposals for premiums via the internet website.
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RIN07
-            & The system shall be expendable with support for mobile technology.
+            & The system shall be expendable with support for mobile technologies.
             & 2\\
     \hline
     RIN08
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 2\\
     \hline
     RIN09
-            & The accounting department will have an interface to the system, for processing invoices and payments.
+            & The accounting department will have an interface to the system for processing invoices and payments.
             & 3\\
     \hline
 \end{longtable}
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RAD03
-            & It will be possible to add additional terms and/or conditions to a policy.
+            & It will be possible to add additional terms and/or conditions to an existing policy.
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RAD04
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RAD08
-            & When a new combination is added to the system, it will check whether it is applicable to existing policies and notify the client.
+            & When a new combination is added to the system it will check whether it is applicable to existing policies and notify the client if needed.
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RAD09
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 3\\
     \hline
     RAD10
-            & It shall be possible to add, edit, query employees details.
+            & It shall be possible to add, edit and query employees details.
             & 3\\
     \hline
     RAD11
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ Four possible priorities have been defined according to the MoSCoW convention:
             & 1\\
     \hline
     RPA04
-            & Premium payments shall be automatically or manually renewable .
+            & The system shall make it possible for premium payments to be renewed manually or automatically.
             & 1\\
     \hline
 \end{longtable}